Thursday, November 8, 2012

Nonet Challenge

by Kim Van Sickler

I'm no poet, but I like writing exercises, and so I was intrigued by Robert Lee Brewer's "Poetic Aside" in the November/December issue of Writer's Digest.

The challenge is a nonet. It's a nine-line poem with each line losing a syllable. You start with nine syllables and end with one. I used my near-week without power courtesy of Hurricane Sandy mating with the cold wind blowing from the North over Lake Erie to create Frankenstorm, as my inspiration.



Flame out

The long-nosed Bic hiccups, and candles  
Photo: Thank you Caroline Brodzinski for letting me connect my fridge to your generator so we don't have to throw all of my food away. We'll keep eating by candlelight and gas fire though. Day two without power and my new office is Starbucks.flame to life all over the house.
As the thermostat plummets,
we pile on the layers,
eat snack foods for meals.  
Hours become days.
We want our
power
back.




9 comments:

  1. As far as poem formats go, I think this one is fun and flexible!

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  2. Lovely poem for a not so lovely circumstance!

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    1. Thanks, Matt! Gotta try and have fun with it, since I can't fight it.

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  3. I love this! I'm not big on writing exercises of the type that say "Rewrite this scene from the POV of the antagonist," but ones that challenge me to write a short piece according to certain specs attract me. I once slashed a 250-word short story to 100 words exactly and won a prize. :)

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    1. I know. There's something very satisfying about chopping off words, sweating the story to make it as lean as possible.

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  4. I know there was something I was supposed to read. The latest WD. It's in my inbox.

    That looks really difficult to do, but great idea for learning to tighten your prose.

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    1. It was not hard. I came up with mine in 15 minutes. I really do believe poetry and short stories do help tighten our writing. Give it a try!

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  5. Finding creativity under rough circumstances. I applaud you!

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